Sunday, March 30, 2014

Problems with our script - 3/24/14

Today, in Language Arts class, Jaein pointed out that we based our script too heavily off of the actual The Taming of the Shrew play. We all realized that we just changed the words from the play to 1950s slang, and didn't really make our script original. Additionally, she also suggested that we incorporate more of the Cinderella theme into our script. Currently, the only Cinderella aspect we have in our script is the combined The Taming of the Shrew and Cinderella character names (e.g. Katherella or Bianastasia) because we thought we were not supposed have any part of the Cinderella story in our script. She also criticized the amount of 1950s slang we had in our script. She said that it made our script really hard to understand because no one would know the meaning of the slang. As a result, we agreed to have a meeting at her house on Sunday (3/30/14) to revise our script.

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